This is beautiful.
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So beautiful…I agree too.Only a true poetic can make something like this.
(account deleted)Uh.
While this isn't badly written, I can't really see any obvious connection this has to anything to do with the Foundation.
But it fits with the site tonally, and can easily be attributed to one SCP or another.
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
"Fits the site tonally and can easily be attributed to one SCP or another" applies to a lot of things out there. Might as well have every creepypasta, which has its own tag, classified as a Foundation tale, because I'm pretty sure it can be attributed to one SCP or another with a bit of effort.
Well he's specifically stated it's open to interpretation, so I think it applies here more than the creepypasta.
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
That doesn't preclude the fact that, as written, it's completely unrelated to the Foundation.
Well, it's been retagged as creepypasta, so it looks like both of our arguments are invalid.
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
VAE does have a point. I went ahead and added the creepypasta tag to the story after considering his points.
The last two lines did it for me. Excellent conclusion that forces the reader to reframe the entire poem. You receive my upvote.
edit: Also, the last two lines were what made me go, ah, okay, this has a place here on the site.
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