This is stupid and good on every level.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 23:38
Number of posts: 43
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I have brought evil upon this house, and I am not sorry.
Well, maybe a little sorry.
Hey, uh, Dmatix, there is already a real life short story called "the Most Dangerous Game". Yeah, sorry. I don't know if this is a problem, but it might be.
I don't think it is. You only have so many phrases in the English language, and centuries of writing. This isn't the first time I saw two stories with the same name.
It is a rather well-known story. You don't have to change it, but it might avoid confusion.
Okay, let me see if I have this right.
EDIT: I finally got it. Rock, paper, scissors. Derp.
Oh well, it was well-written and deserves my upvote just for that.
he had several associates in critical positions inside
The amazing adventures of Feldspar and Lord Blackwood?
Think about it; what kind of friends in critical positions inside a Foundation facility would a rock have? Probably some really solid fellows, maybe the ones literally holding the place together. They hear all sorts of things- they're said to have ears.