First tab. I feel like it still needs to be spiced up a bit, but I'm not sure.
You've definitely got something here, but I feel like it lacks focus. You're going for weird and scary and sad all at once, and the net result is none of those feelings get any time to sink in, leaving it somewhat bland.
EDIT: Personally I think you should try to focus on the sad, the interview at the end got to me more than the "COME VISIT ME IN HELL" parts.
Fair enough. I'll work on making it more concentrated.
EDIT: Possibly on the sad, but…I don't want it to be too close to SCP-348. I'll see as I work on it more.
The first footnote is unnecessary.
Is it? I figure it's within the Foundation's logic to include exactly what would and what would not trigger the structure's anomalous properties.