Regretfully downvoted. It all seems like a bunch of "We are macho, here are our swear words and jargon also we shoot things" to me. The characters didn't stand out to me, I didn't find myself caring all that much about what was going on, and I ended up drifting or trying to scroll faster while reading it.
e: I've tried reading this three times to see if I just missed what everyone else is praising, but I'm not seeing it. It's still just a bunch of jargon between some barely distinguishable soldiers to me. The action's good, but…I don't know if it's the style or the content or what.