I've gotten around to starting work on the proposals I made in the 166 discussion thread. For the uninformed, surrounding the 'controversy' around the wish-fulfillment, LolClef, etc. and such, I proposed a concept based around the cognitive dissonance of the article, whilst scrapping everything else. While it received positive responses, it was generally agreed that it would be awesome, just not for 166. So, I've started on containment
Essentially, the idea was such: that instead of a Teenage Succubus, it is Totally Not a Teenaged Succubus. In fact, it is an Aged Incubus. An incredibly ancient, homophobic, racist, Irish Catholic incubus, on life support and receiving his semen through tube feeding. A significant part of the article is going to be how much of a dickhead this guy is, as I think Scantron (maybe Smapti :\ ) said, "asshole characters who go through a lot are interesting to think about" (paraphrased).
I'm struggling as to how to establish how much of an asshole he is. I've so far got to hinting at the guy treating hospital staff as Room Service, but it's hard establishing him as an asshole in a cold, clinical document. I've also thought about interview logs, but, yeah.