All critique is appreciated. I am aware that the interviews contain inconsistent spacing, but I don't know how to fix that.
Names are important. A good name does not sound like something a 14 year old scribbles in his notebook as the name of his totally rad urban fantasy rpg vidya gaem that he is totally going to make.
e: Further review
1) You should generally not attempt a Keter for your first scip
2) Holy shit this is long.