In rough form, but taking shape slowly. In WIP Scips tab ofc :P
Interesting only the context of another SCP, and even then it's still uninteresting. Pass.
Any specific thing I can do?
Delete it and write something that isn't "166 but a homophobic guy."
This is a bad idea on variety of levels.
I'm confused. In the discussion thread people loved the concept.
It's the execution.
No, it's the idea.
"Asshole suffers" is already the central joke of SCP-661. We don't need another one.
I misinterpreted the phrase "Asshole suffers" so hard.
This honestly comes across as a weak and kinda stupid SCP. There is never, ever a reason that you should include "…with decelerated growth of pubic hair…" in an SCP. Like, at all.
This is old 166 except an old man. That by itself is kinda redundant. I'm reading it over and it reads just like a briefer, male, old 166.
This would probably not do very well. Perhaps setting it aside and working on another idea would be better.