Hello everybody! I know I don't make the SCP sound very interesting in the summary but I like to think it deserves to be given a chance. I recently joined and I'm totally excited to start doing some writing. I am quite new to this whole site though, so I'm afraid some of it is rather lost on me. Any kind of critique you could give would be much appreciated, especially when it comes to the little things I might have missed. Thanks for giving it a shot, I sure appreciate it!
Date: 22 Feb 2013 06:56
Number of posts: 4
RSS: New posts
All right, very first thing, if you can't show an image, just don't put one in. Don't put in a fake and words about how it can't be photographed.
I think you mean they are to be confined in separate storage rooms, not a separate storage room.
SCPs are generally not crosstested, I'm not sure you need to stress it.
Why not stick them in secure containment lockers? It's easier then covering them with a cloth, and you can make cases specifically to contain them, or something. Saves space.
the subject will see into the future. This is… nonsensical. It doesn't sound scientific.
Foresight doesn't work here. Forseeings, or even premonitions.
Why categorize them from how weird they are? That makes no sense.
Over all, the tone is shaky, and the idea doesn't really pop.
Admin, SCP Wiki
I… what? Account deleted after two days of posting this? Did he not like Bright's critique and just rage quit, or am I missing something?
Regardless of the reason for account deletion, I don't think this isn't the place for a comment like this. If you really must know, consider PMing a staff member, but chances are no one really knows. :/