So, since I have been tasked with the rewrite of Eberstrom's Proposal-Arc, I figured I might as well get some community feedback on how I'm doing so far. I posted a link to this draft in the article discussion page, but I figured this would get it more attention. It isn't complete yet, I just want to see how the direction I took it in looks.
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