I'm entering the Mayor's Short Story Challenge (A small local thing. $50 book voucher for the winner, $1000 to the winning school.) with this piece, and I plan to win. I'm confident - borderline arrogant - that I'll win for my age group, maybe overall, because I've looked over previous winners and I didn't like them. But if you can help me improve it, that would be nice.
It's under the WIP Tales tab, the Harrowing of the North. It's based off William the Conqueror's historical genocide of the Anglo-Saxons in the North of England.