Ok guys so I've started making an SCP. I've finished writing a first draft. I'll be honest, it doesn't seem right to me. Either something is missing or something needs to be added but I can't put my finger on it. I need some helpful criticism on this as I don't want to post something that's a load of crap. SCP-1279 is also just a place holder name, it can be changed.
Any advice is appreciated.