This is a thing that Djoric and I did. He is awesome for working on me with this.
Hopefully, you'll enjoy reading this as much as we enjoyed writing it.
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(account deleted)I'm a fan of -A. -B, not so much. The interview is funny, yeah, but the fact that the article just stops after that suggests that the Foundation just said, "welp, that's good enough for us, no more questions, have a nice day." Normally I love mainlist SCPs that incorporate elements of humor into the article, but that last line is way too silly a note to end a main list article on. No vote for now.
We had considered adding an ending where they make plans for the upcoming delivery, but it was decided that it would take away from the final line. But if more people agree with you, it'll be added.
From a comedic standpoint, it works perfectly the way it is and adding anything else would indeed detract from the punchline. But since this isn't a -J, I feel like an SCP document from the Foundation universe wouldn't just end with a bizarre non sequitur.
Just my 2¢.
Don't change anything. It's perfect the way it is.
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See, what I took away from the description was that one looks like a moose and the other is a gray flying thing. I read the interviews in their voices, too. Now I'm about to pass out from laughing but I'll give it a proper read-through tomorrow.
Edit : And voted up. The last line really clinches it.
Djoric, Ihpkmn, this feels like you two woke up a day and threw lots of unlinked words at a paper and then tried to give them a correlation. Normally this would suck, but being you guys you, this is fucking awesome.
W-w-what?
The metal sphere is… pregnant?
What?
+1
Also, the interview log names have Xs in them still.
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