Give me feedback on my first SCP, with a few revisions I made! http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/malevolentslim
Random Capitalization is Uncool.
This has gotten a lot better (by no means good enough though. Just, a lot better than the original), but still, you're focusing far too much on it being a thing which kills you horribly, instead of on the interesting bits.
I could have sworn I had changed those measurements to metric and fixed the capitalization. But I went back and fixed them now.
I'm glad that you think its improving. I do too.
I usually just start my drafts on word, their Spell Check helps a lot
I have google chrome so I get automatic spell checks on everything I write. :D
I'm pretty new to actively participating on the site so you may want to take what I say with a grain of salt.
However, in addition to the already mentioned faults, there's seems to be a lack of connection between the object's appearance/background and the method in which it kills. You have a somewhat interesting back-story in which someone's been damaging Abigail's toys and said owner apparently putting a curse on the box. However, the method of killing appears to be completely divorced from this story thematically.
When reading it, I would have expected that, for example, the type of damage seem mentioned on the toys would then be inflicted as 'revenge' or something similar, rather than say…. death yarn.