Heyo! New draft here: http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/dr-berggren under the tab "Respiration". Review and feedback appreciated! :)
Oh god the houses are breathing aren't they
I like this. I would say that it's a bit short, but I honestly don't see a really good way to expand on it, nor do I feel dissatisfied with the content. I'd upvote this in its current state.
I have one tiny grammar nitpick:
which is then released through the autonomously-opening and -closing windows and doors.
Normally the advice is not to use a hyphen after "-ly", I think, so in this case the phrase would be "the autonomously opening and closing doors", which would also save you from needing the weird hyphen before "closing".
Other than that, I think it's a great, succinct article, with a nice length. I'm not sure I get the point of the addendum, though.