Feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Please refrain from bumping draft threads up; the forums unfortunately tend to move slow, so it's a good idea to wait several hours if you want critique. :) For faster, real-time feedback, I suggest the IRC chat. Alternatively, you can PM a staff member for feedback, or ask them to direct chat attention to the forum thread your draft is on.
And then you put it up on the mainlist anyways….
Seriously, you should wait at least a day for forum feedback to give peopke a chance to see it.