This works even better than the draft I saw. Kinda sad and spooky at the same time.
Date: 23 May 2013 23:02
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I like it, but I feel it could use a lot more detail in describing what's going on, I don't get a good enough mental picture for any of the logs to have any effect. Plus the buildup is way too fast in my opinion. So no-voting for now.
A subject identified as Lucy Bronson appears distraught, and is clinging to SCP-1651 outside of a shut door in what appears to be a residential home. This persists for exactly ten (10) minutes. Initially, she appears to be distraught.
I think somewhere along the way, things may have happened.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?