As usual, all critique and feedback is accepted.
This idea has very little to it. It's a song that forces you to play it and then transports you to Mars. That's literally the entire thing.
What could be done to improve it?
Pick a direction and create more material for this. Like, not "twists", but actual expansions of the concept.
I think that the whole idea I think that the idea as a whole is quite well thought out and well written, but there are a few changes that I would make.
First off, it says that the SCP is "played with a Baroque era symphony orchestra". Does this mean that it's anomolous effects only affect Baroque era symphony orchestras? Or does it mean that the piece is meant to be played with said orchestra? You need to clarify…
Another thing would be the description of its anomolous effects in the third paragraph. "The choir will begin to glow a brilliant red colour, and will levitate in the air, before disappearing with a burst of light" doesn't really seem to be written in the "Foundation-y" style that most SCPs have…try to be more descriptive! What kind of a burst of light is this? Is the source of the light unknown? You need
to yrt and be more thorough…try and write like a scientist would!
Finally, the last thing is that on the third paragraph, there is a sentence that says "When the 2nd chorus is reaches". I think you mean REACHED.
Spelling police… ^_^
Hope this was able to help!