The Door rewrite, new name: Must enter Will die
So, is it better than before? Whether it is or isn't better, how can I improve it?
Also, I based the original on two doors I found in a home in Ohio. Both are the same distance from the basement floor, about half-way up from the basement. One, halfway up the stairs, can't open. The other, on a wall away from the stairs but probably used to lead to the same room-if there was one-opens up to show a wall past the doorway. I couldn't investigate further, though. I didn't own the house.