Looking for some feedback on my current SCP: 'Reality: The Game'. Criticism would be greatly appreciated.
Yay, a computer-based SCP to gnaw upon.
Boring, overdone computer cliche that takes way too long to build up and is horrendously over-described. Could use some help with terminology from an actual computer expert.
Thanks for the feedback. I've applied almost all of what you've said. In regards to the floppy disk it's a 3.5 inch High capacity floppy disk that can store 150/200MB rather than a 3.5 inch high density which only stores 1.44MB. Pathetic fallacy is also a way to express emotions through inanimate objects. It doesn't really make sense in the context. I'll have to change the wording a bit.