Bah, I thought I went through all the cliched items!
First of all, thanks so much for the criticism, I know my writing can be a little wordy at times, but at least I now know where to focus to improve.
I know the collapsable was pretty lame, I just put it there for filler until something else popped into mind. The idea was instead of "addendum," it would be just space or something that would hide it until someone read it over.
I think I worded the O5 thing too much, too, it's not his personal files, let's say, but just some stuff the O5 gave to the agent to do more research on it.
Are you sure [DATA LOST] is not a thing? I could have sworn I've seen it on an SCP here or there, maybe some of the older stuff or maybe I'm getting it mixed up with [DATA CORRUPTED].
I really didn't want to use the word "wish" because then I'd feel the reader would jump to the connection of a genie in a lamp, which is where I did get *some* inspiration, but it's not an SCP (or at least I wasn't trying to make it) about a genie in the lamp.
I'm not as confident as I was before with this, but I'm not ready to give up on it just yet. I'll start making changes, see if this is still salvageable and then decide from there.
Again, thanks so much for the feedback.
*EDIT and yeah, it does seem that I just jumped into writing an SCP as soon as I joined, so I can only give you my word that I've been a lurker for a bit and have been sitting on this idea for a while, too.
And, yeah, lots of newbie mistakes. Forgot to add a description on what the hell I'm writing about.