I need some help making this come together, and getting a more prevalent hook. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Last night I started a thread asking for adjectives (for science); this is what that was about. I'm not finished, but I did make a lot of progress on the charts after a PM from Bob Humbug, who sent me no fewer than 256 adjectives. Thanks again man.
Summary:I need help taking it from here.
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