Draft of first Tale: Clocking Out. Based off the idea of what the end of a Foundation doctor's day might be like. (ignore the scp drafts)
A story about a Foundation staff member being dissatisfied with his job and thinking about his web of lies between his office and his parking spot. This needs a lot of polish, and paints a picture of the Foundation that I really, really do not agree with.
All advice taken and considered.
EDIT: All Foundation-picture details and other mechanical stuff you pointed out has been fixed. Still working on the ending to achieve the desired effect, but I don't think I've made much progress. Criticism towards an ending would be appreciated.