Here is my new rough draft for my idea, Phi. I have changed the SCP up a lot, hoping to at least salvage the idea. Please give any feedback! It's not too terribly much to read.
That is a LOT of [DATA REDACTED], which shouldn't be a thing. Also some other comments:
The material is an unidentified stone with the properties of a metal.
It must have some stone-like properties, since it's identified as being a stone. So which non-metal stone-like properties does it have, and which non-stone metal-like properties does it have?
Agree with all of the above comments, except for one:
If the boy's not been seen since then, why is it assumed that he's anomalous?
If we see an asian boy in a cave in Africa carrying a 1.68 meter stone weighing [REDACTED], and he was never found afterward, then it makes sense to assume that he's probably linked with the anomaly. Although in that case, it's not really necessary to give him a specific designation until he gets found and contained.
Now that I think about the redacted weight, I really wonder if it's super light or super-heavy. If so, that is an important detail to know when it comes to building the magnets for the containment.
The following is inconsistent. How can he have been identified later, if he was never seen again?
later identified as SCP-####-1… SCP-####-1 has not been seen since then.
You say there was markings of the word Phi, along with an unidentified language. Was Phi written as the greek letter or in english?
I think the SCP is too bare-boned. I don't recall the details of the previous version, but right now there is no connection between the word Phi, the perfect shape and it's effect.
I appreciate all the constructive criticism and am making some major modifications to the SCP. This is only part of the story I have in mind, so I shared a sample of it. The full story is better, and will explain more. Now that I know that this has some interest, I will continue to finish up the rest. Thank you all