so, this has issues. there's some wonky pacing, itchy formatting, some diction things, and other problems scattered through the whole deal.
but goddamn i love your ambition. for the record, this runs directly contrary to my 1233 canon, but honestly, i don't care. despite its flaws, this really feels like it was written with love, and i respect the hell out of it, not just because of its use of my own property, lol.
+1, partially for total bias, partially for being genuine and having a ton of heart. ♥