Originally written for Gears' 3rd Birthday compilation; re-posted with permission.
I sing of arms and the man
Storm-tossed by Hera's jealousy
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I want to play this game. It sounds like so much fun!
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
Bad thing is I read the first couple of lines and went "Aw fuck I lost the game"
Good thing is that this article is amazing and creepy as hell. +1 all the way to the moon.
Apparently this tale was so good that it let me actually upvote twice for a moment there. Now only if I didn't undo it. In all seriousness,(and without glitches) great job, this was delightfully disturbing. Now if you don't mind, I need to replicate a certain glitch.
Man, this is good. (have to admit though, with the 'eyeing of the vertebrae', I half expected the last paragraph to subtly shift to the singular possessive from the earlier plural possessive).
Liked it when you first posted it, like it now. Still healthier than playing Diplomacy.
One minor thing: now that it's not in a compilation separated by lines, you could probably do a "—" rather than the "***"