Hi, this is the second draft http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/staryoshi06 (name is 'I'm your favourite character, AMA Second Draft').
I'm not entirely sure about my clinical voice here, so corrections would be appreciated, along with general criticisms about the article, and other corrections.
I'm planning to include a popular SCP in place of 'SCP-████' in Addendum-XXXX-02, so any suggestions would be appreciated. Newer SCPs would be preferred, so that I can actually get permission from the author.