"The Television" [2ND DRAFT]
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Started by: FaemFaem
Date: 26 Jan 2014 23:53
Number of posts: 8
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I want to thank everyone for the very helpful tips on my first draft. I have rewritten and changed everything that didn't seem quite right. So, here's my second draft and I hope it's much better than its predecessor!
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