SCP Foundation

The big issue here is that what you have on the page is essentially just another iteration of the content of SCP-1981. It's Ronald Reagan, cut up, while talking. The core of the tale is just that story, depicted slightly differently.

You've added the whole Alagadda angle on, which sort of doesn't really mean anything to me, since I'm not familiar with that mythos at all, and references to SCP-231, which I am familiar with but you've basically just alluded to it, and the Trump references, which somehow still seem forced in this context. That sort of implies that the Trump presidency is equivalent to the Scarlet King, just because the reference is made in the same sort of in-passing kind of way.

I don't really get what happens at the end. It feels like you've just added a new effect onto the end of 1981 (the hooded man being able to cut up people watching the video) without particularly justifying or explaining it. Is it supposed to be implied that they all used to be researchers associated with 231-Montauk? Is that supposed to be why this is happening? I can sort of put that together, but I feel like I'm doing most of the lifting to put that together.

All in all, it's a weird combination of "yeah, this is what the SCP already established" mixed with "this is a bunch of unrelated stuff that you seem to have mixed in with the first stuff". Nothing feels really organic or new here. It's short, which I am generally a fan of, but the content still needs to be longer in order for me to feel like a real new story is being told here.

Sorry for the negativity after you had to wait so long, but I hope you're able to do something with this. Good luck!