Peter Piper, can you explain your feedback more here?
You're missing a few words in your Special Containment Procedure section so it's hard to follow.
Don't force the author to read your mind here. What words are missing and how can the author fix that?
Your SCP is currently not interesting. It's a vial that kills everything within a certain perimeter.
Why is this not interesting?
In the SCP writing guide, an SCP with similar abilities to yours is used as an example of what not to write about.
I'm not saying to give up on the idea, it's just not great in its current form. You also say "vial" way too many times. Please come up with some synonyms.
How can the author improve their base idea to be more interesting?
Author, I recommend getting the base idea polished up in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum before you try fixing the draft. Go to that forum, post a quick summary of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone asks), and reviewers there can help you develop the concept more so it's less like the very common "thing that kills you" formula that we see deleted off the site almost every day.
(account deleted)
