SCP Foundation

Okay, a few things.

• Instead of posting the link after the fact, you're supposed to change the original post back to the link.
• Instead of posting multiple comments in succession, please edit your previous post using the "edit" function under the "options" tab to the lower right of every comment. That prevents spam buildup, and it's in the rules.
• Furthermore, please remember that review staff prioritize threads with no replies, so adding extra comments to your thread will lower its visibility and make it less likely that we'll see it needs a review on the forum listing. You're essentially sabotaging yourself.
• The description of the thread is so long that it clutters up the rest of the forum. I trimmed it down and moved part of it to the first post.
• The draft is extremely reliant on a popular SCP, which might make people downvote on that alone. People are going to feel that you're trying to use the popularity of the well-known article to boost your own.
• Apart from the crosslinks, the SCP boils down to ''thing that makes you crazy/insane'', which we see posted and deleted a lot, sometimes daily.

Please be more contentious with your posting from now on. Additionally, I recommend getting the base idea polished up in the Ideas and Brainstorming forum before you try fixing the draft. Go to that forum, post a quick summary of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone asks), and reviewers there can help you make the idea more interesting and give you some advice on structuring the eventual article for smoothness of reading and narrative.

I enjoy the concept of a kind of "anti-SCP-999", but I feel like Leveritas's points of being reliant stand. Maybe fleshing out the effects of the SCP, being less clear cut than "makes you insane". I feel like the stakes would need to be a bit higher for the Foundation to keep this thing around instead of just destroying it (Keter-class?).

A possible way to connect it to SCP-999 without being reliant on it is having it presented as a unique SCP, but then needing higher clearance to know it's actually a failed experiment of SCP-999.

Also, I noticed a few grammatical errors and parts that sounded non-clinical (like using is instead of are at points, and vice-versa, and stuff like "cracks within the glass" instead of, say "breaches in the containment cell"), but this is just a draft, so no biggie.

Also, it's "°" not "%" for temperature, and -500°C is below absolute zero, which is kind of… impossible (the limit is -276°C if I remember correctly). It's more of a minor annoyance on my part, but it's just because it doesn't obey the laws of physics in a really fundamental way, and it's something that the Foundation (who are human) would have to do, and not the SCP (which is not).