ElCongrio, this feedback is vague, unhelpful, and misleading.
Sorry, but this idea won´t work. This is basically the old "monster that kills you" cliché.
We have lots of monsters that kill that do quite well on the site, because there's more to the article than just the monster and the killing. Cliches are popular because they often work well; the problem then is keeping things unique, as opposed to just never writing that sort of formula again.
I recommend you to read series IV and V articles, to understand this page´s modern standards.
If you're going to try giving feedback in the forums, try to at least respond to specifics rather than posting a generic response that could be interpreted as relating to any number of drafts. Furthermore, the point of the forums is to help the author improve their work. If you don't have anything to say in that regard, let someone else handle making the first post.
Also, if you want people to check your sandbox you should post the link.
As per the Ideas and Brainstorming forum guidelines: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-1019200/how-to-use-this-forum-ideas
| Please don't just link us a sandbox draft. Give us a quick explanation of the concept. We don't need to see all the complicated details that would be present in a draft; we're helping out with the core idea. Link a sandbox only as optional reading or if a reviewer asks for it. |
