My first SCP. Could use help from more experienced writers
Here's the sandbox: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/missy-lordy
This is just the first "part" of my scp, I'd make it be updated in-universe as the foundation discovers more about this anomaly. This is just the initial document
I think it doesn't sound enough like something that i'd read on the website, so suggestions are welcome. And any other criticism too.
I trimmed your thread summary above, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions and titles under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn