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Other than missing a couple of very handsome references, it was good!

About the non-official ones, Origins is insanely fun. Other than that, very informative!

Very well written. I love the quotes from the old inactive but once very active members. +1'd.

Also, we could use all of you over at the SCP RP.

Bravo, informative, in depth and interesting. something one would definitely look back to and say: "This was their finest hour"

+1

Maybe I'm just thick, but the way that this was laid out was immensely confusing to me. There were several points where it seemed unclear who was talking about what.

I didn't leave feeling like I understood any more than I did when I started reading. Sorry, but for an informative essay that's uninformative, I gotta give a -1.

Going into this, I wasn't sure how interested I would be in it, since I don't RP. Clef's quote was brilliant, though, and so I thought I was in for a fun ride.

Unfortunately, I can't help but feel like this is one of the most inflammatory things I've ever seen on this site. You've got people (Anonymous, I note) literally insulting other site users in this article. Is this really worth archiving? Does it add anything important to the site history series?

This doesn't seem as well researched as your other work, it feels more like it's just you remembering the bits you were in. Not to mention a lot of inaccuracies, including the reason Tamlin House closed down.

So much jumping around my head spun, and it seemed a lot more personal rather than researched or analytical. Nothing wrong with personal, but it made it hard to follow the history of RP here.