This is a really small thing and you're probably aware of it, but you should list the SCP designation at the top with the "Item #:". Again, you probably did this on purpose, but I'm just covering my bases here. :P
Checks of liquid volume and temperature are to be made at 1700 hours and logged in Log-XXXXXX-Alpha.
I would begin this section with "Routine checks of liquid…". I think it would aid in your clinical tone here, as you specify monthly in the next sentence.
Monthly checks of the chemical composition of SCP-XXXXX contents is to be logged in Log-XXXXXX-B, changes of greater than 0.05% are to be reported to Dr. █████ immediately.
Replace the comma with a period, as you begin a new statement midsentence.
Additionally, you have redacted the Doctor's name here. Take a moment to put yourself in the shoes of site personnel reading this document. If you are told to report the data to a specific person, but the person's name is blacked out, then you can't fulfill the procedure, right? It is for this purpose that I recommend never redacting information in the Containment Procedures.
As of ██/██/████, SCP-XXXXXX is to be kept in a 15x15x15 containment cell in D-Block, initial log procedures are to continue uninterrupted.
Ignoring that there isn't a unit of measurement assigned to the containment cell, using a specific measurement size is unnecessary. If it were placed in a 15 x 15 x 13 centimeter space, would it break out of containment? An alternative would be to generalize the area, a la "standard humanoid containment cell" or "specialized containment vault". Something to that effect.
Futhermore, the comment of "procedures are to continue uninterrupted" seems unnecessary here. I think it would be more common to know when testing has been ceased rather than testing is ongoing, in this case.
No personnel that is affected by any type of infectious disease are to be allowed within 10 meters of the object.
This reads a bit awkwardly. Perhaps something like "Any personnel afflicted with a contagious disease must are not allowed within 10m of SCP-XXXX".
All precautions must be taken to Preserve SCP-XXXXX for use in Event Initiative: Eien no Kanbatsu
Personnel do not need to be reminded to adhere to procedure (well, they shouldn't need to be, anyway). They are assumed to be professionals.
lettering around the internal rim of the bowl reads:
最後のリゾートの食べ物は、希望が失われたときに食べる this roughly can be translated to mean: The food of last resort, eat when hope is lost.
So this is some neat flavor, but I would recommend using a footnote here for the translated text. How you do that is:
[[footnote]] Text goes here! [[/footnote]]
During normal consumption the liquid volume of SCP-XXXXX will never dip below 0.8 L, with a lowest recorded temperature of 58° C.
58C converts to 136.4F, which is pretty hot. I don't usually measure the temperature of my food, but if thats the lowest recorded temperature, that sound uncomfortable.
Subjects who begin eating from the bowl report a feeling of insatiable hunger and will continue to eat SCP-XXXXX until loss of consciousness or in the event of third-party intervention.
This falls under a "compulsion effect". Compulsion effects can work and have worked before, but they mostly serve as a means to further a plot by taking choices away from characters, which is uninteresting.
Initial examination of the bowl and its contents immediately following acquisition revealed the contents of the bowl to be 97% identical to ramen found at ██████ █████ ███, the remaining 3% were found to be [DATA EXPUNGED]
I can't say I agree with the use of redaction here. I could say that these are two interesting points about the object, but I don't know because they aren't there. A useful guide to look at for redactions is this guide, right here.
In the event of the extended collapse of infrastructure, SCP-XXXXXX will be utilized as a source of sustenance until non-anomalous food sources can be cultivated or synthesized
This kind of came out of nowhere. Why would the Foundation be concerned about a collapse of infrastructure? Why would they turn to this anomalous source of food that makes you want to keep eating it until you pass out? Surely there are other options.
Precautions should be taken to ensure staff members avoid overindulgence during Contingency 4c, and personnel should not remain within 10 meters of SCP-XXXXXX for more than 15 minutes.
This is an echo of your containment procedures. It is not necessary.
And your last two addendums tell me effectively nothing. With those redactions in place, I have no idea why I should be concerned about this increase of matter, whatever it might be. For all I know, it could be more noodles.
