This is my first SCP, ever, but I've had this idea lingering in the back of my head and I just had to write it down. Check this out if you've got time.
This is my first SCP, and I'd like for someone to check it out. It's probably really bad, but any feedback would be appreciated. Note that this is a rough draft, so I'm probably going to add an addendum or two and maybe throw in an interview as well.
Here is the link: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/greasy
I trimmed your thread summary above, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions and titles under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn