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This is my first go at writing a SCP. I'm only a beginner when it comes to the SCP style and story structure, and I've got a lot to learn. Any feedback whatsoever would be highly appreciated. I got the idea from a video of joke reload animations ([https://youtu.be/lmIlogViPes]). I think this one might be a bit too wordy for my concept, but I'm not sure what to cut out. Again I'd appreciate any help I can get. Thanks.

Hi. This isn't mainlist ready IMHO. The idea is very very basic - weapons that are just very good versions of their mundane counterparts are clichéd; this is an infinite ammo gun, end of story.

There isn't any reader engagement here and I think you'd need a lot of skill (more than I have, anyway) to get past a reader's initial "oh it's a gun that doesn't need reloading. Never mind." reaction.

I'll give it a bit more in a bit.

ETA: for what it is, the article is way too long and the "recovery" section is currently redundant, in that it's trying to instill a sense of engagement where the subject matter effectively annuls it.