[http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/threescoops] The first tab
This is my first go at writing a SCP. I'm only a beginner when it comes to the SCP style and story structure, and I've got a lot to learn. Any feedback whatsoever would be highly appreciated. I got the idea from a video of joke reload animations ([https://youtu.be/lmIlogViPes]). I think this one might be a bit too wordy for my concept, but I'm not sure what to cut out. Again I'd appreciate any help I can get. Thanks.