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Hey everyone, this is my first attempt at an SCP entry so I welcome any and all suggestions/positive criticism.

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/kuravid

The image of the house from the article was found on Google Image Search and is from this URL: http://www.city-data.com/picfilesc/picc55726.php

And for the image of the puppy I simply cut this image in half (also found through Google): http://www.keyt.com/image/view/-/19865480/highRes/2/-/maxh/360/maxw/640/-/tea4mkz/-/DAWG-no-kill-shelter.jpg

I am, however, unsure as to the exact breed of the puppy and am just kinda guessing at its developmental stage. If any of you happen to know more about dogs than me, please let me know the breed. Otherwise, I'll just say it's a mutt.
Also, I tagged the entry in what I thought was an appropriate manner, but I could be wrong.

Hello,

I enjoyed reading your SCP. It is quite obvious you put a lot of thought and effort into this particular idea. Though, I must admit I am a bit confused. The entire idea at the beginning, and even towards the end, felt like it was building up towards something…then it abruptly stopped. That sense of pay off denied is a little disappointing even if it does not distract from the overall idea being interesting.

Are these puppies going to grow up into dogs with a hive mind? What of the screaming man? I think these, and a few other things are burning questions you should not deny the reader, and yourself in answering. It has a surreal and strangeness to it that can definitely be capitalized on.

All in all, I look forward to further drafts.

Hey just wanted to bump the topic due to me having revised a new draft of this SCP based on feedback from the forum and chatroom. I am still seeking more feedback if you have it! Thanks in advance!

Tagging: the site uses a fixed tag list and you are not meant to add tags other than those.
Tag guide here: http://www.scp-wiki.net/tag-guide

Generally if you do not know your way around the system it is better to leave it untagged entirely so that the technical staff can easily see that it needs tags and fix it.

Tone was decent, no obvious formatting, grammar, or spelling problems, so that is all good.

I like the puppy spam and the logistics surrounding it. However the time machine explanation felt like it really leaped to conclusions base off of very little evidence, and seemed kind of over explained.

I'm also not really buying the induces shock in humans and not puppies explanation. I felt a bit forced, like that this thing killed humans only because it was convenient for the story for it to kill humans.

E: spelling/grammar