Click on "GOOD EGG" in the Table of Contents
This is an SCP about the GoI I'm slowly building, MAKE WISH FOUNDATON (as seen here) . This feels sorta good to me, but I also feel that it doesn't make sense to anyone but me. Cliches here:
An interview in which the anomaly is overly cryptic, followed by the interviewer suffering.
This one's less there but:
(GoI/PoI here) gets one over the Foundation, making them look like fools in the process.
I'd say the last one is there because of the Foundation just letting in what is basically the equivalent to an acid attack.
My main problems:
- Is the formatting good? I'm just kind of experimenting with it.
- Is the idea interesting enough? Does my wording make enough sense?
- Does it properly integrate the two cliches and does it do it well enough?
This is sort of the start to the entire story of the MAKE WISH FOUNDATON that I'm starting to do. Title is a work in progress, most likely will change it later. I'm sort of looking for more in depth critique with this, but all critique is much appreciated. Thank you!