There's a lot of work to be done here before your article can be posted on the mainsite, and there are several things which need to be corrected before you should expect reviewers to give you an in-depth read.
One of the first things is the improper formatting in your article as well as the accompanying interviews. All SCP articles follow the same basic formatting template with a rating module, which can be found in the 'How to Write an SCP' guide under the tab 'Templates'. You can copy and paste them directly into your draft, and not need to worry about trying to produce site-ready formatting all by yourself.
Your draft has many errors in basic spelling and grammar, such as confusion between 'its' and 'it's', run-on sentences, and typos such as 'vocal chords' instead of 'vocal cords'. (It's means 'it is', so if you're not sure which one you should use, try writing 'it is' instead and seeing if it makes sense. There are so many of these kinds of errors that it breaks immersion. Instead of feeling like I'm reading the writing of a researcher working for a secret Foundation, the typos are distracting me from the story behind the article. The same goes for the overall tone as well - sentences like 'Agent carter started screaming for 9 hours until his vocal chords collapsed, several minutes later he expired due to his brain liqufying', besides the obvious grammatical issues and typos, just don't feel like a clinical document. Readers won't take the piece seriously and it will end up being downvoted.
In terms of the concept, what you have here is a magical object that gives people powers and then kills them for no reason. This is something that readers of the wiki have seen many times before. While this doesn't mean that it's never something that can be written again, it does mean that in order to get readers engaged with your work, you need to have a concept that stands above the rest to engage them. As it is, if I were reading your article right now, the basic premise wouldn't be interesting enough to get me to upvote. For help in coming up with a good concept for your article, you can visit the Ideas and Brainstorming forum to get feedback. In addition, I'd also suggest looking at the artifact tag to see examples of similar concepts which have succeeded on the wiki.
Good luck and happy writing, author!
