SCP Foundation

Okay, here's my rough draft for the Cliché Con. I know there is no chance whatsoever that I will win (not enough name recognition), but I figured it would be fun anyways. I'm going for cliche anomaly 2 ("Spooky scary murder monster(s)!"), since I've always had a soft spot for monster SCPs - even if very few of them are actually good - and they seem to have fallen out of favor. I intentionally left the draft short, and I'm generally pretty good about SPaG stuff, so this should be quick.

Have at thee!

A few specific questions/concerns I have:

• Full disclosure: This SCP concept was difficult to get feedback on. I was able to get some feedback, but it was more on the side of "it'll depend on how you write it" than "this can work" or "this probably won't work". I've done what I can with it, but just so you know.
• Is the story clear? I originally had the journal explain the entire story, but decided that making it more vague would probably make it more interesting (and more brief). If you don't get it, go ahead and ask.
• I have no medical experience whatsoever. I know that the maintenance process should not work at all (I admit I'm doing a lot of "It's anomalous" handwaving in that section), but is the Foundation's treatment of -2 good? If it isn't, what could I add to make it more feasible?
• I deliberately kept the physical description of -1 and -2 brief because, frankly, that isn't where the meat is. Is there anything I should have that I may have skipped over?
• What would a good name for this be? I am admittedly pretty terrible at coming up with names.¹

As always, show no remorse. I want to be able to look back on this with pride.

Okay, took a look at this. Thanks for writing a short draft! I love short skips. General note, the number (#) numeration is used for extreme precision measurements that can be fatal if misinterpreted, like drug prescriptions. Alternatively, it's for legal reasons to avoid ambiguity. You don't need to do that with easy to count whole numbers. I'm admittedly not sure if that was intentional, but just throwing that out there since it made me pause while reading. Also some hiccups like "demonstrates sight, smell, and hearing comparable with other large predators" ("comparable to those of", or "is comparable to other large predators in terms of sight, smell…"). And designation mixups, since you never mention what SCP-3631 itself is, but refer to it in the SCP-3631-2 paragraph.

What would a good name for this be? I am admittedly pretty terrible at coming up with names.

I don't know, since I think I missed the main point of it. What is the backstory here?

ETA: also, with regards to

I know there is no chance whatsoever that I will win (not enough name recognition)

If you feel like big-name authors have a better chance of doing well due to audience bias, that might be something to talk with the judges about. I'm guessing you meant this in jest here, but you can definitely talk with the hosts if you have serious concerns about this sort of thing.