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Hellfiredragon4
Date: 30 Dec 2018 13:52
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My idea for SCP 5555 and a GOI for the foundation.

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SCP 5555 idea

Hellfiredragon4 30 Dec 2018 13:52

Hi before I start I just want to say that I do have spelling and grammar problems. So I do apologise for any mistakes I make.

The idea I have is that SCP 5555 is a humanoid of disputed origin age due to the fact he can his age and appearance at will. Sometimes he can appear to be a harmless little girl or a member of high ranking foundation personnel. The SCP is also the leader of a group of interested called the followers of blood.

The followers of blood are an anomalous collector group who are interested in specific SCP's for an unknown reason. But the leader has claimed that they are preparing for a war that is rumoured to be an end of the world scenario. While the group are not primarily fighters, they have been known to butt heads with the foundation and various GOI's. It is also known that they partake in human sacrifice for the greater good of humanity and have done mass sacrifices at times. The reasons are unknown but suspected to be for the creation or satisfaction of SCP's in their possession.

What do you all think?

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Dyramsey 30 Dec 2018 19:19

The GOI idea sounds interesting if only a bit cliché. Of course I would have to read a more fleshed out version of the group's motives before criticizing.
I fail to see where the SCP fits in though. It also seems a bit cliché and uninteresting to me unless you added something more, but again this is face value reaction to a shapeshifter SCP. Is the Foundation containing this shapeshifter? If so, what does that mean for the Followers of Blood if they're missing their leader?

Interesting idea but needs more information.

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Hellfiredragon4 31 Dec 2018 14:59

Yeah sorry for the lack of information but I didn't want to set it up as an SCP article yet, per group rules.

So, the SCP is a shapeshifter but is very very old with memories of a war long ago but they are fragmented and disconnected. the SCP doesn't know what happened or which side it was on, all it knows is that at some point in the future the war will restart with an end of the world scenario. In preparation for the coming war, he sets up the followers in order to prepare for it. The SCP was captured by the foundation only to escape after the interview it had with one of the doctors.

The followers are an ancient organisation of people who have little left to achieve with the modern world. They are picked by the shapeshifter for various reasons like intelligence, scepticism and anomalous effects with the same goal as the SCP. They aim to stop the war. But there are two factions: the followers and the cult. the followers want to stop the war while the cult wants to start the war.

The cult was started by a sect of one of the sarkic cults who infiltrated the follows and claim that if they bring back one of the factions involved then they will achieve godhood. Because of this, they have little to no problem with killing mass amounts of people while the followers have restraint.

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