SCP Foundation

STarting with your containment procedures, it looks tight for the most part. I do have qualms with your block quote and the procedures for SCP-XXXX-B being excluded to its own section. I think you could easily integrate them into the ConProcs without losing anything, but this wouldn't be the first time someone has done something different with the ConProcs. I will say that it definitely grabbed my attention.

I will say that the tone is a bit loose, though. The note uses a lax tone unbefitting of a professional document.

While working with D-class it might even be advisable to decorate the outer shell with a facade of occult imagery to ensure the nature of SCP-XXXX-B isn't revealed.

This line is also trouble, specifically the "might even be advisable" part. Remember, precise and concise. Be certain and assertive. It is advisable.

SCP-XXXX are the instructions to building an instance of SCP-XXXX-B an easy to build device which transports the user and a sphere with a radius of 90 centimeter measuring from the working parts of the device to a location to be considered arbitrary until a pattern can be discerned.

This is a long sentence. It also is a bit lax on clinical tone. Maybe try the following: "SCP-XXXX is a set of instructions detailing the process of constructing a device (hereafter designated SCP-XXXX-B). SCP-XXXX-B is capable of transporting the activator within a 90cm radius. The destination is seemingly random."

The formatting in the test logs is a bit difficult to read. Consider adding line breaks in between the subject headers.

Overall, I'm not really feeling this concept. It's a thing that does a thing, but not necessarily an interesting one. And that's if I can understand what is happening in the document. It's my understanding that it is a teleportation device that is easy to build. I don't know what I'm supposed to be getting here

I thought about it a little more. It seems this is more of an object that it incredibly easy to build and remember to build. The story element is that D-Class try to use it to escape, right? I think what this is lacking is the materials required to build the item. Since they aren't explicitly mentioned, then I'm assuming that there is no danger, as D-Class don't have access to whatever may be used to build it.

I do think this is a workable concept, but it just needs a bit more. Thankfully, a very insightful essay was recently made and could be of benefit to you.

Additionally, I'm going to recommend the following links.

• How To Write An SCP page fora refresher on the basics.
• The Clinical Tone Declassified page can help you nail that tone needed for a successful article.