How do I delete my comment? It says that only site administrators can delete it.
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Also I’m pretty sure I understand the core concept of writing an scp but it’s much more difficult and confusing that I originally thought
Yeah, I asked since what you have here seems to be a pretty typical animal-with-dangerous-qualities premise, and most of the test logs don't really present much of a unique take on the predictable "it hurts people/things" route. Maybe take a look at this essay on common SCP pitfalls if you haven't yet?
I just want what’s best for my scp because I’ve done all this work.
This is why we try to encourage that authors get feedback on a concept before spending a lot of time on a draft with a fundamentally shaky premise.
There's admittedly a lot going on here, with all the stuff about these crabs being hostile, apparently carrying a disease, and also being incredibly poisonous. However, not a lot of it is particularly new so far as generic monster SCPs go, so you'll need something to keep a reader's attention.
Also, the Foundation is kind of incompetent as presented here. Why did they run the human consumption test before the animal one? Why didn't they analyze the content of the crab meat before feeding it to anything? Why did they feed the meat to anything at all?
There are furthermore many simple errors in the draft. You mix up "effect" and "affected", don't always capitalize "Foundation" correctly or the the start of sentences, and are missing some punctuation.
Are you willing to get the concept polished up first? I feel like that would be the way to go here, since the draft will need to be heavily edited anyway to get the writing up to standard. Might as well do those edits with some audience-approved ideas in mind.
