Any critiques are welcome. If you have anything you want to say perosnally or want to contribute to the SCP add me on discord Kiko#1037
I moved your thread summary content to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn
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