Took a quick look at this, since it fell to page 3 with no replies.
I will say that I kind of automatically like the premise because I'm a big fan of Kamen Rider. Also when I was little and Power Rangers: Dino Thunder was a thing, I made paper replicas of the transformation bracelets with construction paper, gel pen, and tape. Good times.
Couple things:
- I don't think you need the first collapsible, just have that text in the main page body.
- The bullet point list in the description can be formatted a little differently; maybe have increased indentation bullets for the additional details beyond the primary event occurring. So:
- Recordings show that the objects reappear in a cloud of smoke […]
- Flying Barracuda Strike! > total nitpick on my part here, but I would love for that to be in Japanese romaji with the footnote having the English translation.
Overall… I admit that I didn't read this super closely so there might be a typo that I might have missed, but I think I'm at a solid upvote here for the nostalgia and quirkiness factor.
Definitely reach out to other authors of similar work (I'm pretty sure we've got at least one other super sentai fighter SCP out there) to see what they think, but you got me. Poke me when you mainlist this!
