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ePLix, please do not post full drafts directly in your threads. Instead, make a page on the sandbox site, paste your draft there, and then edit your post here with that link (preferably with a description of the sort of feedback you're looking for.) Further instructions can be found here: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/

Without the JS hat on: I think it would serve you well to go through some 3000 and 4000 series articles to get an idea of what's expected from modern articles.