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Ok citation wise http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/a-shift-at-the-factory a tale where Wondertainment was an ex-employee they tried to kill.
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/industrial-sabotage a tale where they say "The Factory exploits everyone and everything it comes into contact with."
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/assistance-for-the-boss-lady yet another Wondertainment tale where they claim "Wondertainment brand was getting stomped by the Factory" and Wondertainment claims "But that still left the Factory to deal with, and the Factory was not something one dealt with. It wasn’t run by anyone. It had no investors, no shareholders, no CEO, just miles and eons of blood-soaked gears and lonely sweatshop souls churning out soulless muck from its bowels, a cancerous structure seeking nothing but the mammon that allowed it to grow and spread and offer the universe its waste in exchange for more resources."
Sensing a common theme yet? This isn't just a headcannon. This is a common thematic element throughout dozens of tales. They are the ones who sold the Church of the Broken God a corrupt heart. They spread a disease called Iron Lung to their competitors to wipe them out. It is surprising that you thought this was a headcannon and that a site admin wasn't aware of all these things.

GenshedGenshed 11 Dec 2018 22:40
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-3286

I hope they don't taste good, or Mickey D's will be after them soon.

I enjoyed this. I pictured them as small Deep Ones protecting their territory.

by GenshedGenshed, 11 Dec 2018 22:40

I actually know somebody who's writing about something like this. While I like the concept, It's likely that they will publish their article first that people will view yours as unoriginal. They're writing a -J though, so you could get away with posting it though.

Please make sure somebody else who is more qualified than me reviews your concept before you post this to the drafts and critiques forum. My feedback has been notoriously problematic in the past, and I tend to be a little too enthusiastic about a concept.

The short answer is because this is Westrin's O5-1 self insert. And the foundation most definitely switched universes to keep their money and their power.

by plaguebearerplaguebearer, 11 Dec 2018 22:38

I have this idea of an entity that is passed between host, the only way for this mind entity to leave a host is if the host becomes deceased, the host will pass between all of the host immediate family but if there is no more family members in the immediate family it will attach to nearby humans. The entity can only be perceived through one of the five senses, the most common of which are sight, touch, and hearing. The entity can give hosts abilities, some examples are the entity when perceived by hearing can tell the host about the future or others thoughts and the host when perceived by sight or touch can "pick up" the host and allow them to levitate or fly.

I apolgies in if there are any grammar issues that I missed, I really did try.

Not gonna lie, I was earnestly hoping this was a knockoff Wondertainment product that Wondertainment themselves were not pleased by the existence of… but it's still creative enough for a +1

by SergeimosinSergeimosin, 11 Dec 2018 22:34

Jesus Christ on a candlestick Hippo, how many good SCPs are you gonna release this month?

+1

by not_a_seagullnot_a_seagull, 11 Dec 2018 22:32

The storyline is decent and I see no real reason to change much. If you really want to get into detail I would go for https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/UsefulNotes/Egypt. This has helped me out a few times when writing some fics.

Re: Author Post by AimEngieAimEngie, 11 Dec 2018 22:26

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What if after an hour they switched places with the doll? The body turning into the doll and the doll becoming a slightly anomalous body for you.

Re: Idea: Ragdoll by AimEngieAimEngie, 11 Dec 2018 22:18

This is a really neat concept and I really enjoyed reading it! My only issue is with some of the dialogue.

D-1095: The pupil dilated in the shape of a smile. It looks quite menacing. You know the creepy smiles that the villains give in horror movies? Just like that!

This doesn't really come across as something somebody would actually say, let alone a D-class.
A lot of the dialogue in the article is this same way, it's just kind of awkward to read.

Other than that, great job!

Small criticism by maestosomaestoso, 11 Dec 2018 22:18

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. I may have gotten a little overzealous with the profanity, I'll admit that. As for why the thing would be infiltrating the Foundation and GoIs, my basic concept was that it would be looking for something to help it break through to our universe. Its intentions aren't hostile, so much as they are eager. They've been trapped in this one location for so long, they're desperate to get out, whatever the consequences may be. But your retooled idea I think might work better. Less of an "impending, potentially reality-ending horror" vibe than what I had been going for initially, but I think you're right, and that it'll likely lead to a better story overall. This is my first attempt at writing an SCP article, and the feedback is something I've really needed to try and improve.

by Professor LockeProfessor Locke, 11 Dec 2018 22:17

Ah, I didn’t quite see that as I really skimmed that section. Sorry about that.

by The Scary Name ManThe Scary Name Man, 11 Dec 2018 22:16

It is a cool idea to add a more scientific cannon to the strips. Otherwise they just sound like a plot device.

Memes and cognitohazards fit the bill for what you are describing.

Hey sorry for the vague nature of the comment. Recently I have seen a few MC&D tales and am on a bit of a kick about their improved quality. When I heard of them I immediately thought of the Silence from Doctor Who. This sounds like a Sarkic tactic (may have misspelled that one). But with the volume of bizarre cults in the SCP verse these kind of creatures would be in high demand. It seemed similar to SCP-2852 in nature so I thought it may be a good idea to give it a little twist.

Re: The Dark Evangelists by AimEngieAimEngie, 11 Dec 2018 22:12

Maybe it had something to do with the Foundation "disappearing". Like that was them switching universes or something. Come to think of it, why is O5-1 so concerned about this anyway?

by DrblackboxDrblackbox, 11 Dec 2018 22:11
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