Special Containment Procedures: All instances of SCP-XXXX are to be held in different industrial filter bags and locked inside a standard safety locker at Site 77’s Safe SCP wing.
The better way to phrase this would be, "Each instance of SCP-XXXX is stored in a separate hermetically sealed container within a standard secure locker at Site 77."
All the instances of SCP-1359 must never leave containment if not in case of testing,after the approval of Senior Researcher Mite.
Not only is this procedure inconsistent with other SCPs, which usually say something along the lines of "Experimentation may only be performed with prior permission from […]", but specific names should not be in Containment Procedures.
Also, you might want to check your punctuation, you're missing spaces after your periods in a lot of places.
If more instances are tested,their scents and effects will combine.
This does not need to be in the Procedures block. Stating that no more than a single instance may be tested at once is enough.
Removal of the instances of SCP-1359 from the testing vehicle is to be done by Level 4 personnel,equipped of full-face respirators,sterilizing carefully the vehicle and using an industrial filter bag to remove the instance.
Level 4 personnel, as defined in the Security Clearance Levels document, tend to be Site Directors. Why are they the only ones allowed to move the SCP? It's like requiring the president of a company to be around whenever someone makes a delivery. Also, more missing spaces.
Description: SCP-1359 is a collection of seven (7) disposable air fresheners shaped as a stylized evergreen tree (Abies alba),better known as “Little Trees”,usually marketed for cars,each labeled with a different name.
Contrary to popular belief, scientists are not shut-ins. It's perfectly fine to say, "SCP-XXXX is a set of seven (7) tree-shaped automobile air fresheners." Don't use ten words when five will do.
When any instance is located upon a roar-view mirror of a vehicle,it will enter in its active state,and will have distinct effects on human subjects,somehow linked to its name.
The effects will last as long as the instances are located upon the vehicle’s roar-view mirror.
When inactive,all the instances are completely odourless.
This should probably be "When an instance of SCP-XXXX is attached to the rear-view mirror of an automobile, […]" and then immediately followed by its actual function. Few things annoy a reader more than going into detail about how it activates without saying what it does when it activates.
On the posterior of any instance a list including all the name of the scents can be found.The list is the following.
Show Document XXXX-A
There is absolutely no reason to have this in a collapsible. I hate unnecessary collapsibles.
Addendum 1358-01: On the ██-██-████,Researcher ████████ found at his house’s doorstep a cardboard package from the █████ Oil Industries,containing all the instances of SCP-1359.
"Found on doorstep" is one of the lamest origins for a SCP. This is completely unnecessary and the SCP would be better without it.
Show document XXXX-B
This collapsible isn't necessary either.
Dear Mr. ████████,
Congratulations!For being our best costumer of the month,you won the whole limited edition of the “Muti-Fragrance Arbre Magique” Little Trees!
Visit our site http//www.█████oilindutries.com/██. for more upcoming prizes!
-Love, the whole █████ Oil Industries staff.
"customer", not "costumer". Also, why not just redact the entire URL? It's annoying with the blackboxes in it.
Researcher ████████ later affirmed that he never had any contact with the █████ Oil Industries.The site marked on the note package showed no results.
Still missing spaces.
Addendum XXXX-02: Further examinations of the instances showed that they are ██% formed by [DATA EXPUNGED],and this might explain their effects on human subjects.
This addendum is completely worthless, as you've expunged anything that might have been interesting to begin with.
Addendum XXXX-03: The following are the anomalous effects displayed by all the instances of SCP-XXXX when active.
[snip]
Ehhhh. Just not feeling all that interested, this is pretty much a vanilla magic item with random effects and zero context.
