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"Six by nine. Forty-two."
"That's it. That's all there is."
"I always thought something was fundamentally wrong with the universe."
- Douglas Adams, The Restaurant at the End of the Universe

This my entry for the Dystopia Contest: a series of vignettes focusing around a society in the aftermath of an uncontrolled 610 outbreak.

Thanks to everyone in chat who looked at this, especially Reach for reasons he will never know.

Appreciate the input. I really think I'm trying a bit too hard with this, I'm trying my best not to make it sound like every SCP stereotype ever.

Re: SCP-2081 by bedrockpersonbedrockperson, 26 Nov 2014 16:58

They'd listen to it every day, and then get all pissy when they weren't asked to be interviewed.

by Dr LeonardDr Leonard, 26 Nov 2014 16:56

My eternal question: how would the Singing Cacti Amigos react to the actions of this cactus?

by LordSpyLordSpy, 26 Nov 2014 16:47

Yeah, but consider - what if it somehow regenerates inside 795? 795 would be killed horribly.

Re: SCP-795 by VoctVoct, 26 Nov 2014 16:46

<3


Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 by RogetRoget, 26 Nov 2014 16:41

Overall… Not that interesting. The dialogue felt forced and unnatural. Might help to read some Stephen King or Clive Barker to get an idea of how dialogue flows. Sorry I can't help more, Americium241 is excellent at writing Tales, you might want to check with her for more feedback.

Re: Two Buttons by MadCatUSAMadCatUSA, 26 Nov 2014 16:24

—> http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/americangod <

It's THERE. It's RIGHT THERE.

Tear it apart. I want to make this thing work. It's been rotting in my sandbox in one form or another for almost two years!

Please and thank you.

Well, it just so happens that I can give it to you right now.

Exterior

Interior

I wish I could actually make a little digital interactive brochure… oh well. Hopefully you can tell which panel is which.

Oh, right. I guess I've always imagined that personnel live on-site. Obviously it makes zero sense for them to leave Area-12 and enter a civilian area. I'll make that much clear.

by llama66613llama66613, 26 Nov 2014 16:08

I wish this had more upvotes, man.

by ThekilleraxThekillerax, 26 Nov 2014 15:47
by DoktoriDoktori, 26 Nov 2014 15:46
BlandBland 26 Nov 2014 15:42
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-1116

I'm betting it's the other half of "brain in a jar" and it's communicating by a sort of modem sing-song.

by BlandBland, 26 Nov 2014 15:42

I want a brochure like this right now.
Keep up the good work man!

Okay, unless you're attempting a weird gimmick skip, please don't put the discovery of the skip before the actual description of what it is. A few lines in the Containment Procedures is not going to cut it. Tell me what SCP-2192 is, what 2192-1 is, before I start even caring about the history of this thing.

Others have voiced their concerns of this being similar to 055, and while I do think the concept is more salvageable than that, there definitely needs to be something that separates it from just a rather generic 'we don't know what it is and we won't say anything about it' skip.

by Adam GreyAdam Grey, 26 Nov 2014 15:37
DoktoriDoktori 26 Nov 2014 15:37
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Shutout

Nicely done. I actually didn't see it coming.

by DoktoriDoktori, 26 Nov 2014 15:37

been trying to figure this out for a while and unless it's simply the obvious (vat-grown cyborg clone rc spies) i am stumped

by TollymainTollymain, 26 Nov 2014 15:31

Not digging the tone here. Kind of hammy, too.

by Tiam_KaraTiam_Kara, 26 Nov 2014 15:25

For some reason, it's irreparable. I'll glance over it some day when I fix the HTML spaghetti.

by InsipidParoxysmInsipidParoxysm, 26 Nov 2014 15:23
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