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LordSpyLordSpy 13 Feb 2016 04:16
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-2219

I don't know, this just feels like generic Herman Fuller crossed with a generic multi-flavor/effects Series I skip without too much of a charm. The execution is okay, but never makes me get over those two. This could somewhat work if you expanded on the actual backstory rather than the kid's stint at HF.

by LordSpyLordSpy, 13 Feb 2016 04:16

My -J number five to make triple digits. <3 Thanks guys

by daveyoufooldaveyoufool, 13 Feb 2016 04:06

This time it made me laugh.
The downplayed snark here really sells it for me as something this guy hammered out while angrily eating a scorched, half frozen burrito and accidentally hit "submit to database"

by Scorpion451Scorpion451, 13 Feb 2016 03:51
TaktukTaktuk 13 Feb 2016 03:26
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-145-J

I found it funny enough to upvote and have saved it for my own personal enjoyment even if it gets deleted.

by TaktukTaktuk, 13 Feb 2016 03:26

Play that, then start an air-raid siren in the background as the intro ends. At least 10x better.

Thanks. I went with absorbers initially, but spellcheck kept telling me it was wrong, so I went with the next best thing. And yeah, "her" was a typo.

Re: New SCP: Blood Mother by TaelonTaelon, 13 Feb 2016 03:15
TL333sTL333s 13 Feb 2016 03:15
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-1195

Goddammit, that last line. I just read Timmy because I'm going through Series II in order I cannot handle this right now thank you very much

by TL333sTL333s, 13 Feb 2016 03:15

Instead, the guy successfully reads through a 400-page incantation without pause, nukes Dave triumphantly, drinks a pack of beer in celebration and accidentally DWI's himself into a tree.

This is probably the best summation of anything I've ever written.

by djkaktusdjkaktus, 13 Feb 2016 03:13

'Malfunctioning mundane item' isn't really funny.

'Vengeful employee entering something into the system because it annoys him so much' is…actually somewhat funny.

nil vote.

by quantumshardquantumshard, 13 Feb 2016 03:09
GnagoGnago 13 Feb 2016 03:01
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-2945

I would suggest getting to know the site and reading a few successful articles (Preferably recent ones) to get to know what the expectations are, as well as using the Sandbox to put your drafts in and using the forums and chat as a few people linked above.
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And for the love of god, don't self-upvote.

by GnagoGnago, 13 Feb 2016 03:01

Ehh, yeah. There's nothing here to find funny. If the joke was "No effort put into skip" thats already covered by the procrastinati joke skip, which doesnt even have a number. If it's excessive use of redaction… still not really funny. I'd give feedback to help improve, but there's nothing really to improve.

by Jack IkeJack Ike, 13 Feb 2016 03:00
ZynZyn 13 Feb 2016 02:59
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-1337-J

Staff is treating this as a regular article at the moment. It'll be processed when deletions go on as normal.

by ZynZyn, 13 Feb 2016 02:59
ZynZyn 13 Feb 2016 02:54
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Tag Guide

Probably because there are lots of forms of reality bending, or it's not particularly well-defined? Ask CrayneCrayne. (HEY CRAYNE IF YOU'RE BROWSING RECENT POSTS COME ANSWER THIS)

by ZynZyn, 13 Feb 2016 02:54

Damn. That's some next-level spook.
The thing that gets me, though, is that opening statement. It's the 'don't think about penguins' mentality. The first thing you thought about when you read that sentence was, well, penguins. Of course.

When I read that intro, I think of them yelling 'THIS THING DOESN'T EXIST DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT BELIEVING THAT IT'S REAL NOPE NOTHING TO SEE OR THINK ABOUT HERE'.

To be fair, though, this is an interesting conundrum- it's easy to restrict information to those with a security level that's too low, but how do you do the opposite?

Also, you've made something truly overpowered… and interesting at the same time. I, a lowly peon in the scip-craft world, feel that I have to acknowledge that. Kudos.

Re: New SCP: Blood Mother by l33trl33tr, 13 Feb 2016 02:49

The major issue with this SCP is the lack of reader engagement. I'm not exactly sure what is going on, but from what I can tell, it's a rice field that chooses a random person to watch over it and forces them to be very hostile and unreasonable. That's not a very interesting concept, since there's no narrative or emotional hook to get the reader to care about the story. Try to draw the reader in somehow, whether it be via characters or narrative twists or something like that. As it is now, this SCP is just boring.

Make sure to set up a sandbox and store your drafts there. Before posting, run your drafts through chat or the forums to make sure it is the best it can be. Good luck in the future.


And if the whole world is crashing down… fall through space out of mind with me.

by ThekilleraxThekillerax, 13 Feb 2016 02:46

I'm definitely considering developing this idea further in a third interview, where he complains about how much work he had to do in the past. Thing is, he becomes whatever the villagers want him to be, so during the Cultural Revolution, he would probably be denouncing people who believed in previous iterations of himself, which is a pretty interesting idea now that I think about it…

How come there's no "reality bending" tag? Is it under a different name?

by MarqFJA87MarqFJA87, 13 Feb 2016 02:33

Disorientation of a half dream half reality, new information being presented in familiar yet unexpected methods, and world building in every corner. I hunger for more.

by Flying SpidersnakeFlying Spidersnake, 13 Feb 2016 02:32

I don't get it,
please use the sandbox

by drsciantsdrsciants, 13 Feb 2016 02:28

I've seen everything here before, from the ragtag trio of clashing personalities, to Neo-Tokyo, to skipping past everything interesting in Neo-Tokyo to spend time at a seedy bar. Seriously, the word 'pub' made me cringe more than any of Thorn's antics. I wasn't the hugest fan of AIDA for the same reasons, and I hope this series shapes up differently.

by Flying SpidersnakeFlying Spidersnake, 13 Feb 2016 02:27
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